@christopherharmon Sweet! Thanks, Chris! Appreciate the feedback and I'm glad you will get your points now! 🙂

Hi Jacquetta, Here's a link to my notes in case you don't get the notification via email. Hope you find them helpful! 🙂

@lemarticusyahoo-com Congrats on being a quarter-finalist. Excellent work! 🥂

Hi Mike! You continue to shock me with the variety of stories you have to offer. No two scripts/projects are alike. And, chile! This script is gonna be something else! Steamy, steamy! I needed a cigar...

I like to go to movies with no expectations. I didn't even know what this movie was about and didn't watch any trailers. However, I was forewarned that it's not a knee slapping comedy. More like a dra...

I'm currently working on trying to find a theater to do my psychological thriller stage play, finishing a horror-comedy script so I can submit it for feedback, and writing a treatment for a creature f...

Sounds like a great opportunity! Thanks for sharing!

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net 🤣 Yes, ma'am!!

@glenn Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it. 😊

Cool! Thanks for sharing! Sucks that I can’t apply since they require people who meet this: "Must be a Writer who has had at least one fully completed short or feature narrative film (must be credite...

@ronrocearthlink-net Got your feedback. Thanks so much for taking the time to provide feedback. I really appreciate it. 😊

@ronrocearthlink-net Hey, why does it say Moderator under your name, Ron? Did you kick Sandra out??? 😲

@ronrocearthlink-net Awesome! Can't wait to read your suggestions! Where are they? I didn't get an email from OBS with your feedback, and I don't see any attachments on your comment.

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Thanks! It's virtual. Sunday is a 4-hour class. The program lasts for a month. I attend classes 3 times a week, and I have to turn in assignments. The focus is on effective pitc...

Thanks for the shout out, Sandra. 😊 BTW, I was accepted in the program!!!! And my classes start on Sunday. Awwww....so I'll have to miss Sunday's meeting. 😓 It's so much fun attendin...

@lemarticusyahoo-com Excellent! And I want a producer's credit when you finish! 😜 Totally just kidding! Looking forward to seeing all the progress you make. 🙂

Hi Ron, Sorry it took me a minute to get you the promised feedback. Here you go! Hope it helps! 🙂

Just submitted feedback. Hope it helps!

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Wow! That is so awesome to hear! Glad putting as story in the bio/essay worked. 🤩

OMG @scmpbllsbcglobal-net ! That is fantastic! Congratulations on seeing your hard work pay off. Yay!!!! 🤩 🤩 🤩

I have several thoughts about the slap heard around the world. I’ve watched the clip several times (the joke, Will laughs, Jada looks in Will’s direction and rolls her eyes, Will slaps Chris) and I t...

@ron-a Thanks for the awesome feedback! Very helpful! 🤩

@brown-ariel-ngmail-com Yay! I see you were able to get the form to work. Glad you got your points! 😎

@brown-ariel-ngmail-com 🤣 🤣 🤣 Oh you saw us discussing that! Yeah, like you, I often give out 4, sometimes 8 pages of notes, and here I was getting two sentences as coverage. l...