Hi MB, here's a link to my feedback in case you don't get the email. It was a fantastic read! Sorry for the delay in feedback. And I apologize in advance for any typos. I was up until midnight last ni...

Hi Cherrelle! In case I accidentally sent the feedback email to myself (which I have done before 😣) , here's a link to my feedback. Sorry for the delay! Hope you find them useful. 🙂

@esselabbiegmail-com Thank you so much! 😎

@zelieds Thanks, Zelie!!! 😊

Thanks, Sandra and Christopher!!!! 🤩

It's next on my list! So many options these days! I just finished watching SERVANT on Apple TV. I also watched THE DEVIL'S HOUR on Amazon (it only has 6 episodes). Very good but got a little weird nea...

At first, I was expecting horror, but I quickly realized it was just spooky sci-fi --- not horror. Once I accepted that, I was able to appreciate the show for what it was. I loved how the humor grew e...

@admin Thanks, David! 😊

Hey! My short story made the semi-finalist round!!! 😃

No problem! I forgot to mention that I know my example isn't perfect, but hopefully it helps you get the idea of telling the premise without all the juicy reveals. 🙂

Hi Christopher! I didn't know if you still needed feedback on your logline or not. But here's a link to my thoughts if you're still interested! 🙂

Hey Christopher! Good job! I just sent you some feedback. Hope you find it helpful! 🙂

I just applied. Thanks, Sandra!

Hi Christopher! On your form, I only see a picture of a beautiful camel dolled up in makeup. 🤣 I don't see a link to a sizzle reel.

@jessejchildsgmail-com No problem! Without knowing the details of your script, I just wanted to show how adding specifics can make it helpful for viewers to understand the feast they are about to enj...

@jessejchildsgmail-com Better!!! What you have here works. I think the key is to not be too vague. This is another option to consider: After unveiling a childhood lie about his birthright, a small-tow...

@jessejchildsgmail-com 😊 You're welcome. By the way, I hate making typos. Of course, I meant WHO - not GOAL here: Logline: A small-town, misunderstood youth [WHO] Hey, I thought of another ex...

Hey! I hope it's not too late to offer feedback. Here's a link to mine:

Good job, Jesse, on the updated logline! And thanks for the shout out! 🙂 Here's a link to my feedback on your updated logline:

Per our prior discussion, I am unable to get the new Ohyay password to work for me for the virtual HQ. After I log into OBS, I clicked VIRTUAL HQ (OHYAY) AND SCREENING on the left menu. A password win...

Hey M.B.! I'm doing coverages for a contest right now. After I finished my assigned scripts, I'd be happy to take a look at yours. 🙂

Hey Ron! I just uploaded my feedback. Hope you find it helpful!

@christopherharmon 🤣 🤣 🤣

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Thanks! 😊

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Sure! I'd be happy to.

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Thanks! The 2022 Paramount (CBS) Writer's Program, the 2023 The Blacklist/WIF Episodic Lab, Roadmap Diversity Initiative (July 2022), and is currently a semi-finalist in the R...

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Hey MB! Thanks for the offer, but I've received a ton of great feedback already. The script keeps placing in contests (4 so far), so I think it's in pretty good shape at this ...

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Hey I received your coverage! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it and look forward to checking it out.

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Great! Since this is a full script coverage, please follow the instructions in this guide on page 4: Thanks!

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Yay! Thanks!