Hi Christopher! I didn't know if you still needed feedback on your logline or not. But here's a link to my thoughts if you're still interested! 🙂

Hey Christopher! Good job! I just sent you some feedback. Hope you find it helpful! 🙂

I just applied. Thanks, Sandra!

Hi Christopher! On your form, I only see a picture of a beautiful camel dolled up in makeup. 🤣 I don't see a link to a sizzle reel.

@jessejchildsgmail-com No problem! Without knowing the details of your script, I just wanted to show how adding specifics can make it helpful for viewers to understand the feast they are about to enj...

@jessejchildsgmail-com Better!!! What you have here works. I think the key is to not be too vague. This is another option to consider: After unveiling a childhood lie about his birthright, a small-tow...

@jessejchildsgmail-com 😊 You're welcome. By the way, I hate making typos. Of course, I meant WHO - not GOAL here: Logline: A small-town, misunderstood youth [WHO] Hey, I thought of another ex...

Hey! I hope it's not too late to offer feedback. Here's a link to mine:

Good job, Jesse, on the updated logline! And thanks for the shout out! 🙂 Here's a link to my feedback on your updated logline:

Per our prior discussion, I am unable to get the new Ohyay password to work for me for the virtual HQ. After I log into OBS, I clicked VIRTUAL HQ (OHYAY) AND SCREENING on the left menu. A password win...

Hey M.B.! I'm doing coverages for a contest right now. After I finished my assigned scripts, I'd be happy to take a look at yours. 🙂

Hey Ron! I just uploaded my feedback. Hope you find it helpful!

@christopherharmon 🤣 🤣 🤣

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Thanks! 😊

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Sure! I'd be happy to.

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Thanks! The 2022 Paramount (CBS) Writer's Program, the 2023 The Blacklist/WIF Episodic Lab, Roadmap Diversity Initiative (July 2022), and is currently a semi-finalist in the R...

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Hey MB! Thanks for the offer, but I've received a ton of great feedback already. The script keeps placing in contests (4 so far), so I think it's in pretty good shape at this ...

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Hey I received your coverage! Thank you so much! I really appreciate it and look forward to checking it out.

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Great! Since this is a full script coverage, please follow the instructions in this guide on page 4: Thanks!

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Yay! Thanks!

@athenalarkgmail-com Really appreciate it. Thanks!

@karikakarikaaustin-com Great! Thanks!

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Sweet! Thanks, M.B.!

@glenn Yay! Thanks, Gabrielle!

@ron-a Awesome! I'll check it out!

Wow, Christopher! I just checked it out. It looks so good! Love the art and the color. It really shows the story. Depression is such a relevant topic and worthy to explored, and it's great that the ma...

Logline: After getting dumped by her boyfriend and passed over for a promotion, an insecure woman decides to take charge of her life by hiring a physical trainer but discovers the trainer is a psychop...

@ksam-sinoutlook-com @tanikareneeproductionsgmail-com Hey Khaili and Tanika! Welcome to OBS!!! I love that you all are eager to get started reading scripts! So the way it works is everyone, regardless...

Excellent Facebook post! Thanks for sharing, Christopher, and bringing it to our attention. Another resource are the free books in the OBS Drive Library. We should always check this file before spendi...

Wow! Great trailer. Looks like some juicy, compelling stories. Congrats @ron-a!!! I'm so excited for you!