@yvettehartleyme-com What a great ghost story! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm typing up your notes now. I'll message you a link to my coverage after I submit it.

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Thanks for your feedback!

Good points! Us did follow Truby's notes. I missed that! And yes the hubby definitely transformed over the course of the movie. And both women transformed as well when they switched lives and embr...

Completed! Sidney, I sent you a message with a link to my official feedback in case you don't get the email.

I absolutely adore Get Out. That was some masterful writing. For the life in me, I can't figure out the character arc in Us! Can anyone please explain what the arc is, if there is any? There is a twis...

@poullard78 The good thing about horror is there are a bunch of subgenres so you never have to deal with demons if you don't want to! 🙂 For example, Creature Features - Piranha, Lake Placid, Anaconda...

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net @ronrocearthlink-net I absolutely love Truby and have been referring to my notes while writing my horror script. (I took his class years ago.) Unfortunately, he gave a short dis...

Love the sunken place. That was just brilliant on Peele's part. Especially the visual of it in the movie. A really haunting image. By the way, my post is because a writer friend of mine read my syn...

@ronrocearthlink-net I was hoping you'd respond! You give such thoughtful responses! In Get Out, I would argue one thing in your answer. The main character knew he couldn't necessarily trust white ...

A character arc is the transformation or inner journey of a character over the course of a story. The character begins as one sort of person and gradually transforms into a different sort of person in...

Thanks for bumping. Not sure how I missed it! The agenda looks good to me. I have nothing to add. Thanks, Sandra! By the way, is the meeting via video or is it strictly a phone conference?

Wow! That's a good trailer. They changed the white female protagonist to a black male. I'm interested to see what other changes they made. Looks scary! I remember Bloody Mary in my childhood. Yo...

My pleasure! Sometimes it helps to have some pictures with the instructions. 😊

Thanks, Sid and Amber, for your feedback!

@bonitaheresbonita-com I'm so glad the instructions on submitting feedback was helpful! 😊 Thanks again for your supportive notes. I really appreciate it!

Thanks in advance, everyone! I'm interested in seeing which logline option you like and to get your overall impression of my synopsis. Too much info? Not enough? Any feedback will be appreciated! Than...

@admin Hi Sandra, My goals include: Submitting my log line/synopsis to the group for feedback/notes by this Saturday, April 18th. Submitting my script to the group for coverage no later than April 25...

Testing - trying to see if I can post now.

Awesome! Thanks!

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Hi Sandra, My goals include: Submitting my log line/synopsis to the group for feedback/notes by this Saturday, April 18th. Submitting my script to the group for coverage no la...

@ronrocearthlink-net Hi Ron! I suspect that when you were filling out the Feedback form, you probably removed the pre-populated areas that had your information and replaced it with Christopher's info...

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net I don't mind at all! Feel free to add it to docs. I'm so glad you like it. I do stuff like this all the time at work so I figured it might be useful here. 😊

If you are a visual person like me, sometimes it helps to see printscreens with the instructions. I typed up a step-by-step guide to show how to submit your feedback. Please see the attachment. @ja...

@admin Cool! 😎

I was a little confused because the Notes/Feedback form automatically fills in my information as the screenwriter. I assumed that the blanks spots that said "Your Full Name" and "Email" is where I pu...

Done! I hope I did the form right!

This is an awesome list! I recognize nearly all of them. I'm surprised that Silence of the Lambs is considered horror. I saw it more as a cooking show. (fava beans and a nice chianti!) LOL Just ...

Message received! By the way, when I did a fake/test coverage for a script, my notes in the detail section were cut off. I wonder if anyone else experienced this. Hopefully it was a one time fluke!