@jessejchildsgmail-com Thank you for your time and attention. I appreciate your feedback. Please reach out if you need eyes on your future projects. Onward and upward.

LOGLINE: After being blackmailed by a racist immigration agent, an apprehensive illegal immigrant with a secret ability to harden anything teams up with her cosplay-obsessed co-worker to make and sell...

Hello! Hoping all is well! I am Oscar A. Wilson IV. During the pandemic, I finally found a sense of direction when it came to my passion for writing. I began creating scripts for an anthology series, ...

@jessejchildsgmail-com No problem! Without knowing the details of your script, I just wanted to show how adding specifics can make it helpful for viewers to understand the feast they are about to enj...

@jessejchildsgmail-com Better!!! What you have here works. I think the key is to not be too vague. This is another option to consider: After unveiling a childhood lie about his birthright, a small-tow...

@jessejchildsgmail-com This is a vast improvement. Good job. What's the obstacle (preferably an antagonist) that's stopping Isaiah from reaching his goal? As it stands "a controversial love" is a hi...

Keep in mind: the more impossible the goal (typically because of the obstacles or antagonist) is to achieve, the more compelling the story.

@jessejchildsgmail-com 😊 You're welcome. By the way, I hate making typos. Of course, I meant WHO - not GOAL here: Logline: A small-town, misunderstood youth [WHO] Hey, I thought of another ex...

Hello everyone, I've been a member for two years now but only recently really began to to explore the community. I would really like to help anyone that needs a synopsis or treatment reviewed, and wou...

Logline of Episode: Janine and the school go on a trip to the Franklin Institute where Barbara reunites with an old student, Janine mulls over her relationship with her mother, and Ava is contemplativ...

Reporter/Host of BITF (Black In The Future) News, Jackie e'Lan, sends her Robo-Clone, outfitted with "drone crew", into the field to gather footage about "Reparations for Black Americans", instead unc...

My name is Tae and I am a TV (Dram, Comedy and Dramedy) and feature writer (Drama, Thriller and Horror). I also write and create story for docu-series. I'm apart of a duo who has written a feature tha...

From OBS Member James Moorer at Roadmap Writers and OBS Alum Bruce Gordon: Joey Tuccio’s RoadMap Writers platform (RoadMapWriters.com) CANNOT GET BLACK MALE WRITERS with marketable pilots & featu...

Hi, I'm Athena. I'm currently working on my memoir and screenplay, Sailor Girl. I'm an independent Writer and photographer. A former print and broadcast Journalist. Retired U.S. Navy. Self publish...