This is the link I got back for the pitch feedback. Thanks.

Hi Sidney Got the logline and form. Are we supposed to write comments on the form? There did not seem to be a spot

Hey, I went ahead and submitted a rough log line for the new script I am attacking for our group. After submitting, you obtain a link for everyone to see your log line. Note, I have posted the link ...

Hi all! I'm late to this party, but since it is currently fellowship season, that's basically my life right now. I'm currently trying to finish 2 pilots and a spec by May 1st. Kinda challenging with...

Yes. Video conferencing works well for me. Zoom is awesome in some areas in the county and gets challenging in other parts of the country.

I believe the comments are succint, stellar and pragmatic. I promise to be more active in this group since I have downsized my life greatly to focus on what is it important for me.

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Indeed true. I'm looking to post an update real soon on his loss with the Court Case and what that means for the fight for black ownership in broadcast television/networks. The f...

Thanks, Michael. People have been sleeping on Byron Allen. He has been making some power moves, especially with his recent acquisition of The Weather Channel. I think his studio is something for write...

Have any of you been keeping tabs on Byron Allen? He is the CEO of Entertainment Studios and Allen Media Group. He's been in the news a lot recently, after clashing with Comcast and black professional...

Thanks so much, Chris. I am honored to be a part of this group. I may be able to adjust your mailbox feature for you and correct it. Super thanks.

Thanks for accepting the mantle, sir. I look forward to progressing greatly. And helping others in the group. Not sure how to update my email on the profile. Don't mind sharing it here. Darkmarkt...

Hey, Chris I try to inbox with messages, however, it fails to go through. I believe you need to enter your email in your profile if you want to be communicated that way.

Thanks, Christopher Let me know what you need in terms of format specifics. So for your Faith Based script, is it a new idea entirely. I like your writing process, sir. It is similar to mine. I ha...

Hi Sidney 1 Working on more drafts of existing script. Need format specifics 2. New idea in late stage of development, need info on format 3. Need feedback from black and also industry per...

Sid's Response: 1. No, I am not at the stage of creating drafts as of yet. That could change with the time I have now as a result from working remotely at home. 2. Presently, I am working on a new...

Briefly, 1. Are you working on a writing project that needs new drafts? 2. Are you working on an entirely new idea for a script? 3. What do you need most as a writer to escalate your writing craft? 4...

@yvettehartleyme-com That link is not from the Screenplay Forms Portal or a Request for Coverage or Request for Notes and Feedback form. That link is to a forum post, which is why you're being direct...

@purposedproductionsgmail-com Thanks for the note, Jana. Coverage or notes/feedback requests must be tied to a group. There's a line on each request form to designate the Writers Group for which the...

I would love to provide feedback on anyone's script. How do I do that? I signed up for the last orientation - maybe I miss understood.

@yvettehartleyme-com Hey Yvette. What is the genre of your script? I think that would help you decide which group to request coverage from.

Jana, I did this but I sent it to the wrong group. In fact someone gave me coverage.

@purposedproductionsgmail-com Hi, Jana: There are several ways to send messages to the entire membership, groups, and even the OBS mailing list of applicants and former members. Yet, I'm careful to re...

Doesn't look like we have enough interest to move forward with this concept. These remain dynamic times. Maybe we will revisit in a week or two.

@rushs847aol-com Honest, you don't need to know whether a script is old or new, it's all new to the group. Reading and feedback time should be based on the average time for a full script anywhere fro...

@purposedproductionsgmail-com Jana great you have something you're a co-writer on, however, if the other writer is not an OBS member it's illegal for us to read. Do you have the total rights to the s...

Jana, I tried the link and it sent me back here. is that what was suppose to happen?

I have a script, but because of the music included, not sure if the format is right. Would love to get feedback on that issue and all the others.

I am down with Sidney to moderate. Thank you. I know we are in good hands. I see Jennifer's point if we are in different groups.

Thanks for all your insightful comments. It's great to see writers that care so much for the process. Congrats, Jana on that faith based script. Exciting. I am looking forward to working with you. Chr...

@ronrocearthlink-net "Based on a True Story" and "Inspired By True Events" mean exactly what they imply. You can write an "Inspired By True Events" story on pure newspaper, n=magazine articles, &...