M.B. Stevens

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RE: Producer/Production Company Red Flags?

You're right to be cautious. A major red flag for me is strangers asking for unpaid work, especially full treatments, rewrites, or script samples, without a contract or clear compensation. Grifters of...

In forum Industry and Market Trends

2 weeks ago
RE: Arthur Demetrius Glenn - Project Eradicate - v1 White

Hey Arthur, Here's a link to my notes for your feature Project Eradicate: Please use what resonates and toss the rest. Thanks for sharing your story.

In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE - Post the Logline and Link Only (Please review instructions)

3 weeks ago
RE: Chris Moore - TABLE 360 - WHITE

Hey Chris, Here's the link to my notes for your comedy pilot TABLE 360 My notes are highlighted in yellow throughout your script. Please take what resonates and toss the rest. I hope my notes help. ...

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3 weeks ago
RE: Meemee Taylor - FATAL FEEDBACK - v1 white

Hey Meemee, Last but not least 😊 Here's a link to my notes in yellow on your story: Please use what resonates and toss the rest. If you have any questions, feel free to email me. Thanks for s...

In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE - Post the Logline and Link Only (Please review instructions)

3 weeks ago
RE: Cherrelle e'Lan - Seoul, U.S.A. -Adapted Stageplay - v1

Hey Cherrelle, I've put my notes here: I hope they help, and thanks for sharing your adaptation.

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3 weeks ago
RE: New Member From Atlanta living in Los Angeles!

@chrismoore-prodgmail-com Hey Chris, you can see my script in the OBS script coverage. You can also post your half-hour script there for me and others to read.

In forum Member Introductions

1 month ago
RE: Visual EP Short

Congratulations on getting it in the can. Thanks for sharing.

In forum OBS Lounge

2 months ago
RE: Cherrelle e'Lan_Odd Balls_v1_

@cherrelle-elanyahoo-com You can find my notes in this link: Please take what resonates and toss the rest. Thanks for sharing your story.

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2 months ago
RE: HARDENED - V6 GOLDENROD

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Thank you for your notes, time, and attention. This helps me tighten this story. Onward and upward.

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2 months ago
RE: Cherrelle e'Lan_Odd Balls_v1_

Hey Cherrelle, it was great meeting you this weekend. I'd be happy to take a look.

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2 months ago
RE: Three, Four, or Five-Act Structure?

@wolfelexi3gmail-com I second what David said. 4 or 5 with an hour-long dramedy.

In forum NOTES AND FEEDBACK EXCHANGE

2 months ago
RE: Arthur Demetrius Glenn - Major Players 2: Thunder vs Lightning - v1

Hey Arthur, I've submitted my notes for your review. Please use what resonates and toss the rest. Thanks for sharing.

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2 months ago
RE: Arthur Demetrius Glenn - Major Players 2: Thunder vs Lightning - v1

Hey Arthur, I'll check it out and get back with you. Thanks for sharing.

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3 months ago
RE: Simonton - New Member From Pittsburgh Living in LA

@simonton412gmail-com White Lotus, Righteous Gemstones, Serverance, and Devil May Cry. What are you watching?

In forum Member Introductions

3 months ago
RE: THE HORROR WRITER - logline

Hey, Meemee, you can find my suggestions here: Good job. Thanks for sharing.

In forum NOTES AND FEEDBACK EXCHANGE

3 months ago
RE: HARDENED - V6 GOLDENROD

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Thanks for your time and attention.

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3 months ago
HARDENED - V6 GOLDENROD

An immigration agent with a gambling problem blackmails an undocumented janitor who has a mysterious ability to harden anything she touches. She teams up with her quirky co-worker to produce and sell ...

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3 months ago
RE: Simonton - New Member From Pittsburgh Living in LA

@simonton412gmail-com Hey Jay, I got a pilot in the script exchange section. Check it out when you have time. Thanks.

In forum Member Introductions

4 months ago
RE: Simonton - New Member From Pittsburgh Living in LA

Welcome, Jay! 🎉 A very inspiring journey. Wrapping up a feature-length project and diving into another meaningful story? Way to hustle. I have no doubt you’ll hit that June goal. Congrats on y...

In forum Member Introductions

5 months ago
RE: Kevin Bourne - New member from Toronto, Canada

Hi Kevin, Welcome to the OBS community! It’s great to have you here. I’m M.B. Stevens, a screenwriter from Arizona. I mostly focus on sci-fi dramas and dramedies, often exploring societal issues, part...

In forum Member Introductions

5 months ago
RE: New member from Silver Spring, MD

Welcome, V Efua Sweeney Prince, It’s great to have you in the OBS community. Your background as a published author and professor of Black Studies is incredibly inspiring, and I can’t wait to see how ...

In forum Member Introductions

5 months ago
RE: New Member From Atlanta living in Los Angeles!

@chrismoore-prodgmail-com Oh, yeah forgot to say I'm in Phx, AZ. We're neighbors.

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
RE: New Member From Atlanta living in Los Angeles!

@chrismoore-prodgmail-com I actually have two hour-long pilots for notes. One is THE 40 and the other is HARDENED. I appreciate any notes you have. Thanks.

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
RE: New Member From Atlanta living in Los Angeles!

@chrismoore-prodgmail-com I'm currently working on a rewrite but I have a couple of scripts in the requests for notes or feedback section if you would like to take a look. Thanks.

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
RE: New Member From Atlanta living in Los Angeles!

Hey Chris, welcome to the OBS fam. Love the multi-hyphenate energy. You’re like the Swiss Army knife of storytelling. Also, props for repping the golden age of Black cinema. I look forward to networki...

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
RE: Travel Writing project

Happy New Year Khaili, you got a new follower on IG. Thanks for sharing. Onward and upward.

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
RE: New Member from London, UK

@dkazembehotmail-com Not any new ones at the moment but I do have two older scripts in the request for notes section. Thanks.

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
RE: New Member from Los Angeles

Welcome to the OBS family, Karlton. I'm thrilled to have another storyteller from L.A. in the mix. Looking forward to seeing how your pen shakes things up. Happy to connect. Onward and upward.

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
RE: New Member from London, UK

Welcome, Dziko! Congrats on rocking the indie hustle with your micro-budget films. A psychological thriller/horror sounds like a killer way to kick off 2025 goals. Here's to landing that agent and mak...

In forum Member Introductions

6 months ago
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