M.B. Stevens

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RE: Good Day! New Member from Sacramento

Welcome, Courteney. You're in the right place to learn, grow, and connect. I look forward to reading your scripts and networking to hone our craft. I'm excited to have you in the OBS family. Onward an...

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6 months ago
RE: Natalie Miles - New Member from Los Angeles

Hi Natalie, Welcome to the OBS family! 🎉 From West Philly to LA, it sounds like your journey has been as dynamic as the stories you create. Authentic perspectives from the African diaspora? I'...

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6 months ago
RE: Alexia Wolfe - New Member from Dallas

Hi Alexia! Welcome to OBS! It’s great to have you here. Congrats on your recent graduation. That’s a huge accomplishment. Your Media Arts background and screenwriting experience will definitely be a ...

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6 months ago
RE: New member from Brazil

Hi Durval! Welcome to OBS! Thrilled to have you here as part of this vibrant community of talented writers. Your voice as an Afro-Brazilian writer is such a valuable addition, and I'm excited to see h...

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6 months ago
RE: REVOLUTION, MY LOVE - SUMMARY AND CHARACTER BD

@admin-2 Thank you for your kind words and for being such a guiding light on our journey. Your mentorship and encouragement mean more than I can express. OBS has been an incredible space for growth an...

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6 months ago
RE: Ambush TV

Hey Oscar, Please use what resonates and toss the rest. Thanks for sharing. Onward and upward.

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6 months ago
RE: REVOLUTION, MY LOVE - SUMMARY AND CHARACTER BD

Hey David, I've sent my notes via the note and feedback portal. Please use what resonates and toss the rest. Good job as always. Here is the link:

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6 months ago
RE: POWER CONCEDES NOTHING - pitch

Hey, David Good treatment and hope my notes help. Onward and upward.

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9 months ago
RE: DIE RIGHT OR LIVE TRYING - pitch

Hey, David. I've uploaded my notes. Thanks for sharing.

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9 months ago
RE: Arthur Glenn - Major Players - v1 White

Hey Arthur, Here is the link to my notes for your script. Let me know if you have any questions or need clarification. Onward and upward.

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11 months ago
RE: Finalist and two Quarterfinals awards

Congratulations. Enjoy every victory. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
RE: Ron Artis Jr. - Worlds Apart - v3 Pink

@ron-a Hey Ron, I sent you my second round of notes. Great job and thanks for sharing.

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1 year ago
RE: HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V5 GREEN

@ron-a Thanks for giving this a second look. I appreciate it.

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1 year ago
RE: Happy to be here!

Welcome aboard, Vlad. I dig the historical vibe of your projects. I'd love to read anything that you're ready to share. Let me know if you need eyes on future working projects. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
RE: HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V3 PINK

@jessejchildsgmail-com Thank you for your time and attention. I appreciate your feedback. Please reach out if you need eyes on your future projects. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
RE: HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V3 PINK

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Hey Meemee, Thank you for taking the time to read and give me notes. I sincerely appreciate it. Please reach out when you need eyes on your projects.

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1 year ago
RE: Christopher Harmon - THE GHOST OF REV WELLS - V2BLUE

Hey Christopher, Thanks for sharing. I sent you my notes but you can also access them from this link:

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1 year ago
RE: HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V3 PINK

@jessejchildsgmail-com Thanks for your time and attention.

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1 year ago
RE: Hey there!

Welcome aboard, Jesse. I'm happy to have you in the OBS community. I'm also a product of the Windy City. I currently reside in Phoenix, AZ. We're neighbors. Please message me when you're ready to shar...

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1 year ago
RE: Christopher Harmon - THE GHOST OF REV WELLS - V2BLUE

I'd be happy to take a look. Thanks for sharing. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
RE: HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V1 WHITE

@christopherharmon Thank you for your time and attention. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
RE: New Member - From the Caribbean to Maryland

Welcome aboard, Lise. Happy to have you in the OBS community. I look forward to networking and sharing stories with you. Message me anytime you need eyes on something. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
RE: New from ATL

Welcome aboard, April. Happy to have you in the OBS community. I'm Looking forward to networking and sharing stories. Message me anytime.

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1 year ago
RE: Ron Artis Jr. - Worlds Apart - v2 Blue

@ron-a Great story. Here is my feedback if it doesn't show up in your inbox. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
RE: Ron Artis Jr. - Worlds Apart - v2 Blue

Hey Ron, I'll check it out and get back to you. Thanks for sharing.

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1 year ago
RE: HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V1 WHITE

@arthurdemetriusglenn Thanks a ton.

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1 year ago
RE: HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V1 WHITE

@admin Thanks for your time and attention.

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1 year ago
HARDENED PILOT - YOU GONNA PAY - V6 GOLDENROD

LOGLINE: An immigration agent with a gambling problem blackmails an undocumented janitor who has a mysterious ability to harden anything she touches. She teams up with her quirky co-worker to produce ...

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1 year ago
RE: Jon-Carlos Evans - "Ashé" Pilot v.1.5

@joncarlosevansgmail-com No worries. Thanks for sharing.

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1 year ago
RE: Cherrelle e'Lan - TRIGGERY - 1ST DRAFT

Thank you for sharing Triggery. I've sent you coverage and I hope it helps you tell your story. Onward and upward.

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1 year ago
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