Got it. Interesting concept. By hiding ones ancestors, you destroy ones roots. We need roots to grow.

I have L.D. Logline Dysfunction. Hopefully it is getting better. Let me know how to make it THE BOMB. The story is worth whatever it takes

That was a great meeting for real, Thank you Sandra. So many talents in the group. Yvette and I even brought matching literary props. Good book. Thanks for the pic Meemee. When I saw you with th...

That time is good for me. Either of those dates will be fine for me Thank U, Sidney

With the Covid thing, you won't be Walking but they are trying to make us Dead

With the Covid thing, you won't be Walking but they are trying to make us Dead

COVID 19 is a Horror film by itself. Be careful in Texas. Politicians there are as bad as they are here in AZ

Hi Sidney Cool, I will submit a pitch shortly. Naw, didn't get the feedback. Feel free to email me at DARKMARKTWAIN@YAHOO.COM

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Yes lots of variations on horror are out there to explore. Jordan Peele effectively used the cruelty and dehumanization of white racism to make GET OUT an award winning Horror f...

@poullard78 Wow, your excerpt seemed pretty scary to me. Was thinking of doing something similar. Roberta Flack did a song called REV LEE. About a preacher tempted by the devil's daughter. So if y...

Thanks Sandra. Hope we all get some accolades, some notice and eventually some phat checks. Just keep on that grind

Hi Sandra. I missed that those also. Both docs look good to me. Thanks for taking time to set that up for us. Had some good news this week. Won semi-final honors at the INTERNATIONAL NEW YORK FI...

Hi Sidney I agree. A lot depends on the logline. I hope to get better at it here. In another group, a person presented their logline as a choice between the 3 she posted, Also you could add your o...

Thanks Sidney If we keep at it, we will OWN these festivals and competitions. Looking forward to reading some OBS scripts this weekend

Thanks for alerting us about this opportunity

Hi David Yes I have to get better with understanding the process and having patience. Looking forward to the feedback. Nine drafts on the scripts and thirty nine for the pitch. I hear you. Long ro...

I would like our group to impact screenwriting like Motown impacted music. It will be hard work but as a loving, creative community, we can do it. For the moderator , keep us pumped up and don't hit...

Excellent guidelines and well designed. I look forward to working with you

Greetings, I just joined up if that's okay. I'm in Phoenix. Pacific time. Free anytime Sunday

Greetings Just joined the group. Have written a project for this genre. Need feedback on it. Tried to do it as low budget. Look forward to reading your scripts. So Aaron, any relation to Adrian D...

Greetings If I put a script in for feedback, should I include a logline or synopsis -- or just the solo screenplay?

I like a twist on who the antagonist truly is. As the story unfolds, the true villain is hidden until the end. Then your brain thinks back to see if it is logical. It's great when it fits together ...

Greetings Mine will need feedback before it is ready to market. Is it better to submit the logline/synopsis first or the rough draft first?

Love the historical spin they used om ABE. One of my favs

@ronrocearthlink-net Hi Ron. Got the notes. Thank you. Helped to hear that I should have some horror at the beginning of the story. Doing a rewrite to put a lynch scene at the start - so the tone...

@ronrocearthlink-net Sorry Ron, I didn't get the notes. I look forward to seeing them. All help is welcome

Sounds good. Can't wait to read some scripts

Voted and ready to read, write and get better. Be nice to use this time to get ahead of the game while everything is shutdown

Thanx Mr. Wilson Great idea to check the synopsis of the flicks I compare it to. Especially since it already worked for them. I need to submit the script so I can get pointers on that too. It needs...

House of Virgo? That's my sign. I'm next door in Arizona. Producing stuff? Excellent, you will see some good stuff here. I'm in the horror and faith based group. Ironic, huh? What would you lik...