Hi Sandra, I was hoping VAMPIRE IN BROOKLYN would have a similar kick as BLACULA but it is way different. Viewers rooted for BLACULA, but Eddie Murphy's vampire was a villain. Thanx for the links to...

Hey Ron, Zulu Macbeth? Really? Sounds awesome. Was it filmed? That director still doing projects? Alternative spins on history and literature is my thing.

Marked it down. Thanks for the extras Sandra. Was hoping there was a magic spell to improve loglines but it takes hard work, study and countless rewrites. Either that or I'm using the wrong type of...

Thank you Ms. Luckey I wanted to do futuristic on low budget. Tricky. Hope the content is unique.

Save me a seat on the READING RAINBOW, Levar. I got the list. Thanx Sandra

Maybe at this point we should get feedback from DA MAN to see if he is into it yet. Rather than a contest, it would probably be 'need driven' by what he hears the industry is looking for. If his nam...

The 31st sounds good. Thanx all

What a great idea if he is down with it. If he likes it, he can keep reading. He can get it in front of the correct people, as long as it's strong. I like the BYRDLAND LIST, for the name. Gives pr...

Got it. Tough love in our community is not personal We are pushing each other to be our best

Thanks all. Won't get results for a few weeks. I appreciate all the feedback. Helped more that words can say. Good luck on your story Michael. I know it will be awesome.

Hi all. Have not rcvd any feedback coverage on this script. If you sent it thru the system and didn't get to me, please feel free to email me at DARKMARKTWAIN@YAHOO.COM. Thank you

Got all excited to see the Horror Writers assoc has a Mary Shelley award. Shoe in? Nope, females only. Thanks anyway. Hope someone from here wins it

Pitched my Mary Shelley/Frederick Douglass script this weekend. Thank you all for helping me get the script and pitch to a much better place. Its a David and Goliath thing, since they are such a lar...

Wow, thanks. THE NATIVITY and THE GOSPEL were set back then and made a decent profit. Good ideas for comps. Will use them in the pitch. Much gratitude

@purposedproductionsgmail-com Hi Jana. Have to work on the pitch for sure. The LALA LAND reference was regarding the technical format of a musical film. The proper way to describe songs, how dance ...

Thanks again for the advice of looking at the LALA LAND script so I have a better idea of acceptable formatting. Looks like I have to rebuild it like they did the Bionic Man. I'm going for the bigge...

I unfortunately arrived on CPT, but learned a lot. Thanks Lavisha

Hi Meemee, got it. Thank you. I appreciate it. I may have purchased the last untainted beef in America. Ready to get that BBQ grill rolling for your Oscar after party

Hi all. That was for sharing so you know what some responses can be out there. With OBS, once our material is ready, David can shepherd it through and readers will be more likely to be helpful, supp...

Yeah, the agents and execs out there can be a bit brutal when the logline is not what they consider good enough. Even when they invite you to pitch. Below are examples I got back. The first one is ...

Birthday during the lock down? Sorry Meemee. Hope you managed to have a good time anyway. Love this time of year. Once you win a few Oscars, your birthday will be a paid holiday. BBQs in the park...

Thanks for the meeting notes. Learned about evil umbrellas from Japan and Soul Catchers that heal the mind. And that Yvette and I use the same bookstore. Loglines are super important. If we can mast...

Writing loglines feels like going to the dentist. Would rather avoid the pain, but it must be done. Thanks Meemee, those examples help me lots. Got to remember not to try and tell the story, concen...

Hi all. Tried to write this as low budget as possible but still keep it futuristic. Use of a lot of historical clips, minimal locations.

Got it. Interesting concept. By hiding ones ancestors, you destroy ones roots. We need roots to grow.

I have L.D. Logline Dysfunction. Hopefully it is getting better. Let me know how to make it THE BOMB. The story is worth whatever it takes

That was a great meeting for real, Thank you Sandra. So many talents in the group. Yvette and I even brought matching literary props. Good book. Thanks for the pic Meemee. When I saw you with th...

That time is good for me. Either of those dates will be fine for me Thank U, Sidney

With the Covid thing, you won't be Walking but they are trying to make us Dead

With the Covid thing, you won't be Walking but they are trying to make us Dead