We should share our thoughts on this ground-breaking project.

If anyone can make it work...it's you. Sure could be pretty wild

Love to see you out there killing it. St. Paddy? Wow. Saints seem to be good for you. Is that a Louisiana thing? I hear they have a football team that...forget it. Yo, next one...ST. PAULI'S BEER. Wri...

i have self-published, but would like to go through an established publisher. Thank you for the info Sandra. Enjoyed your recent seminar too. A Buffalo Soldier story? Sounds banging. Being in AZ, I ha...

Thank you. I look forward to your notes

BOB MARLEY - ONE LOVE. It gave the background of a black cultural icon who still has a huge influence on society, plus the music keeps that head bopping and toes tapping.

Thank you for sharing with us David. Angela Davis was mentioned in the story. Although not a screenwriter, she'd be a great guest speaker if you could swing it. We are standing on the shoulders of gia...

@ksam-sinoutlook-com A Western sounds great. If there is anything we can do to help, please reach out. Have safe travels too.

I'm happy to hear Meemee and Jesse Ann are doing alright, I hope all of our members were not too badly affected. What a nightmare. Glad to see the city pulling together to get through this.

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Thank you from the heart for your analysis. My angle was trying to make a horror/comedy, based in a place that I knew well. For such an in-depth review, it must have taken quite a...

HI Oscar. Hope your script is coming along well. Thanks for sharing the logline. The concept is awesome. Notes on the link.

Congrats. The million dollar check is coming.

Have not seen that movie but always wanted to. Sounds interesting. Kurt Wimmer sounds German. It'll be fascinating to see what his take on voodoo is.

Hey David. This is certainly a story that needs to be told. Thank you for sharing it. Hope my feedback helps in some small way.

In Buffalo, where severe snow blankets the holiday season, a hard-partying deputy sheriff must swap his strip club escapades and football obsession for detective work, to unravel a series of brutal we...

Hi Arthur. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to check this well written story out. If you have any questions feel free to reach out. Here's my link.

I look forward to giving it a read

@ksam-sinoutlook-com Thank you. It's much appreciated

@arthurdemetriusglenn Thanks Arthur. If I can offer any feedback on your project, feel free to let me know.

Attached is V3 - PINK Thank you for everyone's feedback  THE-GHOST-OF-REV-WELLS.pdf

THANK YOU ALL. Our members have tremendous talent and passion for this difficult craft. There is a need for telling OUR stories. Let's all keep at it and push to make those stories GREAT.

Thanks to OBS and everyone's help to make me become a better writer. In the last couple of months I won Finalist in the Harlem International Film Fest, and Quarterfinals in Emerging Screenwriters Com...

Newer logline - In 1878 Alabama, a preacher who secretly teaches his congregation literacy, violating an unwritten law, is framed and lynched by violent locals, led by the town’s deputy who has a hidd...

Again... Deep appreciation for the notes that you gave me on REV WELLS. Very, Very helpful. Zerlina pregnant? Genius touch. Greatly raises the stakes. Backflips of gratitude. One of the rules for ...

Hi Arthur, yes indeed I did get your coverage and I am deeply grateful for your time and wisdom to help me make it better. Best of luck with that Literary Manager. Thanks again

Thanks for your feedback, MB. I appreciate it. Have safe trip Arthur. I hope you didn't miss out on any sight-seeing while there. Grateful that you thought enough of it for a 2nd read. I look for...

@arthurdemetriusglenn Thank you Arthur. Much appreciated. Do you have anything posted that I can review for you? The script by MB Stevens is pretty darn good too. Peace

Inspired by true events -An Alabama preacher who covertly teaches reading to the oppressed in lynch-happy 1878, is framed and hung by townsfolk. The vengeance of his ghost is unleashed on the mob who ...

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Just sent your feedback. What a great story. Thanks for sharing