Thanks to OBS and everyone's help to make me become a better writer. In the last couple of months I won Finalist in the Harlem International Film Fest, and Quarterfinals in Emerging Screenwriters Com...

Newer logline - In 1878 Alabama, a preacher who secretly teaches his congregation literacy, violating an unwritten law, is framed and lynched by violent locals, led by the town’s deputy who has a hidd...

Again... Deep appreciation for the notes that you gave me on REV WELLS. Very, Very helpful. Zerlina pregnant? Genius touch. Greatly raises the stakes. Backflips of gratitude. One of the rules for ...

Hi Arthur, yes indeed I did get your coverage and I am deeply grateful for your time and wisdom to help me make it better. Best of luck with that Literary Manager. Thanks again

Thanks for your feedback, MB. I appreciate it. Have safe trip Arthur. I hope you didn't miss out on any sight-seeing while there. Grateful that you thought enough of it for a 2nd read. I look for...

@arthurdemetriusglenn Thank you Arthur. Much appreciated. Do you have anything posted that I can review for you? The script by MB Stevens is pretty darn good too. Peace

Inspired by true events -An Alabama preacher who covertly teaches reading to the oppressed in lynch-happy 1878, is framed and hung by townsfolk. The vengeance of his ghost is unleashed on the mob who ...

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Just sent your feedback. What a great story. Thanks for sharing

Sorry you had to battle the online form. But you won, knocked it out, first round. Again I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review it. It's a great moment to get feedback like that and I a...

Bravo to Cord, indeed. Very proud of him and his adaptation. Thanks for explaining the self sabotage aspect. Makes sense. Black people have a wide variety of life experiences which should be expose...

Keep racking them up, Meemee. Way to go.

Thank you for sharing this and educating us on what to expect from pitch feedback. I just sent my notes. Much appreciated

@loribethcrawford Yes, Jesus said, "Let the dead, bury the dead." I think at that point of the story when he was feuding with Thomas, Clarence was too selfish to see the bigger picture. And the pa...

I read the script and watched it on OBS. Thank you for the opportunity. Nice to see one of our guest speakers blow up so large. He's a fellow desert dawg from AZ too. Reading it first, I was prepa...

Yes, finally saw the Marley movie Tuesday at the drive-in. A benefit of living in AZ. Nice weather. Blasted the soundtrack from the car speakers, rocking to the max. Particular scent in the air. P...

@loribethcrawford I plan to watch it again. Yes, you are sadly correct that some would be offended. The question is - what part of it offended them the most? The melanin part? But there were his...

What a great film. I'm fascinated by this era and was exhilarated to see melanin in its rightful place. I question why this wasn't released and marketed closer to Easter. The story was well crafted...

@crystal3fergusongmail-com Hi Crystal. Thank you for taking time out of your journey to review that. Compliment appreciated. Let's make sure you get credit for that work. On the side panel, screen...

@crystal3fergusongmail-com Not a problem. I look forward to your feedback

VERY Grateful for your insight, Meemee. And encouragement. I'm getting closer to being where I want to be now as a writer. Your feedback will help tremendously. Looking forward to diving into th...

Thank you, Meemee. You've seen a thousand loglines this year so I take your advice as gospel. Much appreciated.

What an incredible opportunity. I might try a bite of that digital apple.

Those films are new but do we have access to read them from the library or elsewhere?

You're welcome. I have one that is a Xmas story from a unique Black perspective. Could use your international set of eyes. Its under the A QUESTION OF FAITH. The title is, ROCKING BETHLEHEM. The ...

Cross genre is a plus actually. Thank you for sharing your work. Here's the feedback

Sounds interesting, thank you. You might consider joining the GET OUT GROUP, that has a focus on Horror, if you haven't yet.

Hey Crystal, No hurry on the read. I hope the script is enjoyable during this holiday season and gives a new perspective on the historical events it covers. A new film coming out, THE BOOK OF CLAR...

That's excellent news. Thank you, Crystal., especially the 'easy to read', comment. I appreciate it and hope you have a wonderful holiday season. Do you have anything posted? I'd love to return th...