Yvette Freeman Hartley

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RE: Coverage and Feedback Requests Are Open

Sandra, I copied the coverage information. I Don't want to make too many mistakes but I too want coverage. David thanks for giving the lineup of how to present our work and Thanks to Sandra for giving...

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Project Goals and Tasks

Great Sandra. I will break down my task - this will keep me online and make me work. I've been so involved with the problems that we're all been going through that I need to focus on what's ahead in m...

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Get Out New Feedback Request - PLEASE READ

Sandra, if this is ok could you forward this to Chris. I hope it fits the guidelines. Yvette

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Get Out New Feedback Request - PLEASE READ

Congratulations on first writing your screenplay and pitching it! I love that you based your pitch on a true story and revenge is always a great reason for the haunting of a ghost. Your pitch is hitti...

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Project Goals and Tasks

My goal is to finish the first Draft of my horror script HANGING, get feedback, rewrite and prepare myself to pitch and get a manager.

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Important Member Update | Screenplay Forms Portal Testing

Jana, I did this but I sent it to the wrong group. In fact someone gave me coverage.

In forum Fruitvale Station

4 years ago
RE: Member Availability

I'm available everyday except Sunday.

In forum Claudine

4 years ago
RE: Important Member Update | Screenplay Forms Portal Testing

Jana, I tried the link and it sent me back here. is that what was suppose to happen?

In forum Fruitvale Station

4 years ago
RE: Coverage and Notes/Feedback Forms

It worked!

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Coverage and Notes/Feedback Forms

ok, I copied the URL and wrote my title in it. I hope it worked.

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: David's Demo of a Request link

Thank you David I could get it. The one-sheet was not what I expected from Grey's Anatomy - well the last words "young" seems to be it's selling point. It worked.

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: April Tentative Meeting Date - Online

Hi All, April 19 or 26 would be great for me. I think everyone should have a chance to talk about the primary project that they want feedback on. I'm sure all of us have a few scripts finished that ar...

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Fruitvale Station Member Locations & Availability

Jana I’m sorry I thought I had given my location. I live in LA and open to meetings Sunday or Monday evenings or what ever times the group decided.

In forum Fruitvale Station

4 years ago
RE: What are your expectations and rule suggestions for our group?

Jana, You covered a lot of territories. Once a month meetings sound good to me. What should we start with - Log-lines or pages or a whole script that we all could read. Or maybe together make up a lis...

In forum Fruitvale Station

4 years ago
RE: GET OUT GROUP: 2020 Writing Goals and Availability for Group Meetings

To All, I love reading each of your post and learning the different ways we write. Treatment, outlines or from the story. I write from story idea to a logline to outline then to treatment. But I also...

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Project CRE8 - BET.com

Thank you Rene for the information!

In forum Fellowships, Contests and Festivals

4 years ago
RE: Writing Time versus Day Jobs, Family, Life

Sidney, Thank you for the reference. Making time for writing is one of my major problems. I made myself write this for a couple of hours this morning instead of the evening when I'm tired. I had to wr...

In forum OBS Lounge

4 years ago
RE: Tasks and Responsibilities

Lavisha, Have you done this before! You're so on it. Everything you have written rings great! You're making us into a real writers group even though we might be miles away from each other.

In forum Claudine

4 years ago
RE: Your Expectations for this Group

My expectation for this group is to get honest feedback and to give honest feedback in return. To help me see what is missing in my scripts especially if three people say the same thing I better liste...

In forum Claudine

4 years ago
RE: Introduction

Hi Jana, Glad you took on the job as moderator. I will help you any way that I can. I didn't feel up to working the technology but looking forward to reading everyone's work and making helpful comment...

In forum Fruitvale Station

4 years ago
RE: Rules and Standard Codes of Conduct

Lavisha, I agree with everything you said. Encouragement, feedback and being accountable with each other is important. Always being involved, doing and completing the tasks that are on the table is ta...

In forum Claudine

4 years ago
RE: GET OUT GROUP: 2020 Writing Goals and Availability for Group Meetings

Sandra, Thank you for being so on it. I tried last night to place my goals for this group. I have a script that is almost first draft level and two more scripts in the pike. I would like to find a man...

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
RE: Writing Goals for 2020

Hi Lavisha, I'm working on a couple of projects - one is a Ghost Story, another is about a young girl trying to navigate through a toxin environment and another is about the life story of a famous act...

In forum Claudine

4 years ago
RE: Moderator?

Lavish, I would love to be a moderator but I don't feel I have the internet skills like you do. I'm still floundering. But - I'm writing my butt off.

In forum Do The Right Thing

4 years ago
RE: Moderator Nomination

Lavisha I finally found the page to say I confirm your nomination. You'd make a wonderful Moderator - so committed. Thank you.

In forum Claudine

4 years ago
RE: Updates on How Covid-19 Health Crisis Will Directly Impact Screenwriters

Thank you for clarifying this crisis but also reminding us about using this downtime. Dusting off projects and continuing to do our work. Keep safe.

In forum OBS Lounge

4 years ago
RE: Moderator?

Lavisha, I vote for you as the moderator.

In forum Do The Right Thing

4 years ago
RE: Moderator

Sandra, You on it. I have been real busy this week and not online as I should. I will read the rules by Sunday and look for your post in the forum. Thank you!

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
Rules for the Group

So what are our rules? Share so many pages, Loglines our time frames? What are we aiming for? I'm aiming for connecting with a manager, being more productive and getting my drawer full of work out of ...

In forum Get Out

4 years ago
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