Hi Yvette, I just submitted coverage for you and emailed you an edited PDF. Let me know if you get it. Ariel Brown

Hey Michael, I'm emailing you the edited script pdf. Here is the link to the coverage. You have a spine-tingling, engaging piece here. I can't wait to read more!

Thank you both for your notes! They are very helpful!

Hey Pierre, Just submitted coverage for Beyond Forever. I throughly enjoyed reading it and hope to read any future drafts! I also emailed you the edited script PDF. Here is the link to the coverage:

Hi Everyone. I just posted a request for N&F for Act 1 of a Fantasy Drama feature. I look forward to reading the notes!

Working Logline: When a woman astray encounters a magical old woman, she must exercise her inner power to face her past and free herself.

Sure thing Christopher. I'll have it to you in no more than week. I look forward to reading it.

Hey Christopher. I would love to give you feedback. I clicked the link but I didn't see a PDF for the actual draft. It was just taking me to the coverage request form you filled out.

Hi Everyone. I just joined this group and I am ready to give notes/feedback to anyone in need.

@christopherharmon Thank you, Christopher!

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Thank you Sandra! I look forward to reading yours as well!

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Thank you Sandra! I look forward to reading yours as well!

@bonitaheresbonita-com Thank you Bonita! I can't wait to learn more as well.

My name is Ariel (like the three letters R-E-L). Very excited to be joining OBS. My focus with writing is on features and short films, as well as short stories. My stories tend to lean towards fantasy...