@jessejchildsgmail-com No problem! Without knowing the details of your script, I just wanted to show how adding specifics can make it helpful for viewers to understand the feast they are about to enj...

Requesting notes and feedback will now be worth 35 stars. Giving notes or feedback will earn you 50 stars. To kick things off, you can earn 50 stars by giving me feedback on an idea. Here's a pitch ...

Hi all, looking for feedback on the latest version of my logline for a feature script I'm developing called Isaiah 11. Shout out to MeeMee for helping me the last time I tried this. Logline: A small-...

Logline -- A party boy deputy must put the strip clubs and football fanaticism to the side, in order to solve a string of werewolf murders during a severely snowy holiday season, in Buffalo To complic...

You can update the link by using the edit function. I don't think there's a need to take them down as most people will post their intention before providing feedback. And, having the notes still here ...

BUFFALO CLAWS Logline: A hard-partying Deputy in Buffalo, who inwardly just wants a simple life, must solve a string of ‘WTF’ murders, during blizzard season - as the holidays approach. To complicate...

Hey, Sandra. Great story. If you have any questions about my notes please let me know. Can VR next week if you want. Onward and upward.

Thanks for sharing that. Props on the research. An out of control corrupt government is plenty horror for me, especially when greed is more important than human life. Be glad to discuss it in the V...

Hello Sandra, I have uploaded your coverage.

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net lol so cool I'm uploading my coverage now of your script

I'm used to your horror stories. Politics now? In this country, i guess it still can be a different kind of horror. I'll get this read, thanks

Hey Sandra, I'd love to take a look. Thanks for sharing.

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net lol Fannin in Houston. that's my neighborhood

Looking forward to reading!!

LOGLINE - In an alternate history, a film maker with a short fuse is tasked with creating a documentary about a homeland started by Marcus Garvey that is now a global super power. The film, illegal i...

I'm looking for legal advice/representation for a two page Shopping Agreement and was quoted $2,000. Can anyone refer me to someone who is less expensive? Thanks, Lisa

Logline: After getting dumped by her boyfriend and passed over for a promotion, an insecure woman decides to take charge of her life by hiring a physical trainer but discovers the trainer is a psychop...

The 2024 Development Track application is now open for submissions until Monday, May 15th! As you are probably aware, the Development Track allows all feature writers and writers/directors (U.S. and ...

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Audience is becoming such a topic in my workplace and conversations about TV and Film. We are really going to have to consider that we don't write just for Black people but fo...

It's always exciting to have one of our own acknowledged and celebrated. Please give a huge applause to OBS Member Kimberly Allen for being featured in an article on #RollingOut for her work as Staff ...

(For Educational Purposes Only) A high school teacher's personal life becomes complicated as he works with students during the school elections, particularly with an obsessive overachiever determined ...

Attention women and nonbinary screenwriters 40+: applications are now open for The Writers Lab 2023. The Writers Lab is “the only program in the world devoted exclusively to script and career developm...

The free even is hosted by OBS member James Moorer. Mon 2/20 to Fri 2/24, 5:00pm-6:00pm PST each day Roadmap Writers invites everyone to attend this FREE five-day series of events spotlighting Black ...

Per the article, they are looking for black creatives. Wish they listed a way to submit projects.

Hi everyone, This is a necessary support system I'm grateful to be a part of. I wrote my first screenplay around 2016 and have a few under my belt now. I produced a short and am developing a film base...