My Goals for Get Out: To write a dark comedy script and get it sold. Writing Goals Outside this Genre: To publish a few plays, a series of children's books and comedic tv show on my life as an actor...

Thank you so much.

Hi David Yes I have to get better with understanding the process and having patience. Looking forward to the feedback. Nine drafts on the scripts and thirty nine for the pitch. I hear you. Long ro...

Thanks Sidney If we keep at it, we will OWN these festivals and competitions. Looking forward to reading some OBS scripts this weekend

Truby is great and even better in person. Love the book. The Screenwriter's Journey is a must have for writers. Disney lives by it.

Thank you Yvette I will keep working at it. Yes an example of the revenge would give it more impact. Great idea. The Wikipedia version is the 'townsfolk' version. Mine comes from the black folks v...

Thanx Mr. Wilson Great idea to check the synopsis of the flicks I compare it to. Especially since it already worked for them. I need to submit the script so I can get pointers on that too. It needs...

No i didn't use the form. For Chris's project. Will do.

Greetings Just joined the group. Have written a project for this genre. Need feedback on it. Tried to do it as low budget. Look forward to reading your scripts. So Aaron, any relation to Adrian D...

I like a twist on who the antagonist truly is. As the story unfolds, the true villain is hidden until the end. Then your brain thinks back to see if it is logical. It's great when it fits together ...

It depends on how you use tropes. I think it's always effective if the writer finds a way to twist a convention to elevate the material or satirize it in some way. Like Wes Craven did with the "girl a...

Sandra, I copied the coverage information. I Don't want to make too many mistakes but I too want coverage. David thanks for giving the lineup of how to present our work and Thanks to Sandra for giving...

Love the historical spin they used om ABE. One of my favs

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com I actually did it the "right way" the first time. And then did the "wrong way" the second time. I read your instructions and will look them over again, thanks. I also emailed Ch...

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Did you feel that squeeze? That was me giving you a great big virtual hug. GREAT JOB! Thank you for making my life a little easier. Everybody else, please remind your fellow memb...

@christopherharmon Sorry you didn't get my notes. I probably made a mistake on filling the correct name fields. I just re-sent them with the adjusted fields. To be on the safe side I will attach a co...

@ronrocearthlink-net Hi Ron! I suspect that when you were filling out the Feedback form, you probably removed the pre-populated areas that had your information and replaced it with Christopher's info...

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Somehow I did or did not do something and the notes didn't get to Christopher the first time. I re-did the notes on a new form and adjusted the beginning contact fields (which I ...

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net I don't mind at all! Feel free to add it to docs. I'm so glad you like it. I do stuff like this all the time at work so I figured it might be useful here. 😊

Yes, Sandra. I read 30 Days of Night over and over. Awesome script. Great film. Us is complex, complicated and layered wonderfully. It takes a second look to get ALL the layers. Abraham is just fr...

I just filled out a Notes form for Christopher. I hope I did it right and he got the notes.

If you are a visual person like me, sometimes it helps to see printscreens with the instructions. I typed up a step-by-step guide to show how to submit your feedback. Please see the attachment. @ja...

My goal is to polish my pitches and scripts so they are ready to market. Not sure if I will start one from scratch. I will be doing rewrites constantly but look forward to feedback so it becomes the...

Great Sandra. I will break down my task - this will keep me online and make me work. I've been so involved with the problems that we're all been going through that I need to focus on what's ahead in m...

Sandra, if this is ok could you forward this to Chris. I hope it fits the guidelines. Yvette

My goal is to finish the first Draft of my horror script HANGING, get feedback, rewrite and prepare myself to pitch and get a manager.