Lemar Fooks

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RE: Ron Covington - ONE DIRTY NIGHT'S WORK (feature) - v6

Added to my reading queue.

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10 months ago
RE: Christopher Harmon - DON'T DIE IN DUBAI - Synopsis V2

Christopher, I'm back commuting to work in Gilbert, AZ but have added "...Dubai to my reading list for my trip next week. You're in Phoenix, right? One of these trips we'll have to hook up. Write...

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11 months ago
RE: Charmain Johnson - Half Sisters - v1 White

Hey Chay, I've been crazy busy traveling for my day job tut I've downloaded your script and looking forward to giving it a read on the plane on Monday. Write on, LeMar

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11 months ago
RE: Lemar Fooks - Haven Sent - v2 Blue

Thanks! Onward and upward indeed.

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11 months ago
RE: Lemar Fooks - Haven Sent - v2 Blue

@mbstevenswritegmail-com M.B. Thanks for the offer. I had an issue with my membership, so David posted my pilot script Haven Sent on my behalf. Yes, I'd appreciate feedback and I'm all for the qu...

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11 months ago
RE: Lemar Fooks - Smoked Glass - TV Pilot Pitch - v1

@christopherharmon Great. Thanks. It's dropped down on my writing priority list, but I'll circle back with you when I get back to writing the pilot.

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1 year ago
RE: Lemar Fooks - Smoked Glass - TV Pilot Pitch - v1

Jesse, Thanks for the feedback. I've had to drop this down on writing priority list with my Haven Sent pilot now at the top. I look forward to circling back and engaging with you on some of your q...

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1 year ago
BLACK TO THE FUTURE - A 5 Day FREE Event

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1 year ago
RE: Cherrelle e'Lan - Black In The Future - Draft 2

@cherrelle-elanyahoo-com Hi Cherrelle, Here's the link to my feedback. Feel free to reach out if you have any questions.

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1 year ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sky Racer - v2

@cherrelle-elanyahoo-com Hi Cherrelle, Thanks for taking the time to read Sky Racer and provide feedback. I especially appreciate you sharing your grandfather's connection to the events of that time...

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1 year ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sky Racer - v2

Sky Racer was recently selected a Quarter-Finalist in the Emerging Screenwriters Action & Adventure Screenplay Competition! I posted it on The Blacklist where it is currently being read by an in...

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2 years ago
RE: Michael Adedeji - RIGHT RIGHTEOUS & TORN ASUNDER - Beat Sheet

Hey Michael, My notes are here: We can talk about them if you like when I'm back in USA.

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2 years ago
RE: Michael Adedeji - RIGHT RIGHTEOUS & TORN ASUNDER - Beat Sheet

I'll give it a read.

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2 years ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sky Racer - v2

Thanks! Please see the new and improved Sky Racer v2 attached. @glenn Sky-Racer-v2.pdf

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2 years ago
RE: Lemar Fooks - Smoked Glass - TV Pilot Pitch - v1

@glenn Thanks Gabrielle. I definitely need to work on Emerald's characterization. There's a season long arc regarding the origin of that term, how and when she finds out about it and how she respond...

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2 years ago
LeMar Fooks - Sky Racer - v2

Logline: The aftermath of a near fatal crash leaves a brash young racing pilot with more than he bargained for when the opportunity to fly a commercial seaplane becomes a race against time to save hi...

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2 years ago
RE: Lemar Fooks - Smoked Glass - TV Pilot Pitch - v1

Meemee, You are absolutely correct. Without setting a deadline my Smoked Glass pilot will languish in a sea of procrastination. I am giving myself the deadline of June 10th to complete the first dr...

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2 years ago
RE: Lemar Fooks - Smoked Glass - TV Pilot Pitch - v1

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Meemee, Thanks for the feedback. Looking forward to your pearls of wisdom. LeMar

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2 years ago
Lemar Fooks - Smoked Glass - TV Pilot Pitch - v1

Smoked Glass is a half-hour single camera dramady about three Chauffeurs, with dreams as big as their neuroses, who navigate limousines through the maze of Hollywood’s biggest egos, wildest nightlife,...

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2 years ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v2

Greetings OBS, Just posted updated draft of Sidney's Kidney. Thanks again to all who provided feedback. Here is a summary of the major changes in V2: Tightened up the pace in the first 15 pages. ...

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3 years ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1

@aarondantleygmail-com Thanks Aaron. Good eye. Great note regarding the midpoint.

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3 years ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1

@loribethcrawford Thanks Lori. Will work to bring the noise in the next draft.

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3 years ago
RE: Tenet by Christopher Nolan

Great. I was looking forward to seeing the movie at a drive-in in Hollywood, but the Covid-19 surge killed that plan.

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3 years ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1

@rstewart384284gmail-com Hi Rhonda, I've had it work perfectly sometimes and other times it did weird things like copying the summary into the other categories or not recognizing information in the su...

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3 years ago
RE: Meemee Taylor - Negative Split - 2nd Draft

Meemee, Fun read. Lots of laughs. But of course, there are notes. Here is the link:

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3 years ago
RE: THE MURDER MINISTRY by Lori Crawford | Coverage Request | Draft #1 as of 9/21/2020

Hi Lori, Wow, what a family. Nice job. Here's the link to my notes. LeMar

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3 years ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1

@rstewart384284gmail-com Hi Rhonda, Thank you in advance. I'm also a firm believer in quid pro quo so if you have a script in need of coverage I'll gladly add it to my queue. Creatively, LeMar

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3 years ago
LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v2

Logline: An arrogant, self-absorbed NBA superstar needs a new kidney, but the only possible donor is a crazy fan who inadvertently ruins the star’s life by creating friction among his team, his family...

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3 years ago
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sanctuary - Draft 1

@wrco-777gmail-com Thanks Michael.

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3 years ago
RE: Hitsville, USA (1hr pilot) by Ron Covington---Group:Empire

Ron, Here is the link to my feedback on Hitsville, USA. Hope you find them helpful. LeMar

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3 years ago
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