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New guy in town... Hey there! I’m Larry Collins - a drama writer. Thanks for having me as a part of the group. I’m exciting to get going. Along with being a writer, I am also a working broadcast journalist. If you ever ... |
In forum Member Introductions |
2 months ago |
Another Newbie!! Hey OBS members! My name is Quianna, and I’m a one-hour drama writer. I enjoy writing coming of age and sci-fi stories. Looking forward to getting to know ya’ll and reading your work! |
In forum Member Introductions |
3 weeks ago |
RE: Lemar Fooks - Smoked Glass - TV Pilot Pitch - v1 Just submitted feedback. Hope it helps! |
In forum NOTES AND FEEDBACK EXCHANGE |
2 weeks ago |
2022 Update to Stars Awards for Coverage Effective Tuesday, March 1st the Stars Member Accountability and Incentive Award system will be revised as follows: Completing Coverage – 85 stars Providing Notes/Feedback – 35 stars Requesting Cover... |
In forum Admin and Housekeeping |
3 months ago |
How to Contact Shannan Johnson at The Professional Pen Thanks to all of you that attended our first Q&A of 2021. We were delighted to have the fantastic Shannan Johnson join us. Please post your takeaways from today's webinar below. For those of y... |
In forum OBS Lounge |
1 year ago |
Kevin Williams- Feels Like Summer Draft1 Samuel a tween on the verge of being a man is sent down south for the summer to get to know his newly discovered father and family while trying to find his place in a new world of no longer being an o... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1 Hi LeMar, I got it to work. Hope the comments are helpful and thanks for the chance to read your script. Best, Rhonda |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
1 year ago |
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1 Hey Lemar, Here are some notes and a link to the feedback form for this. Hope you find the notes to be helpful: Sidneys-Kidney-Notes.txt |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
1 year ago |
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1 Hey LeMar - What a fun script! Just submitted my coverage. Here's the link: |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
1 year ago |
Tenet by Christopher Nolan I don't remember whom, but somebody emailed me a while back about this script. It's attached and I'll also upload it into the library later this evening. TENET-by-Christopher-Nolan.pdf |
In forum Script Hunter |
2 years ago |
RE: Tenet by Christopher Nolan @lemarticusyahoo-com FYI! |
In forum Script Hunter |
1 year ago |
RE: LeMar Fooks - Sidney's Kidney - v1 Hi LeMar, Something weird is going on with the coverage form and I'm going to have to send David a note. I filled it in, saved it, kept getting some weird error and now I can't even get a blank for... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
1 year ago |
Meemee Taylor - Negative Split - 2nd Draft Logline: Caught in a marathon cheating scandal that went viral, an overweight runner enters a 100-mile race to redeem her reputation and win an obnoxious fitness blogger’s bet but ends up gaining much... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
Gautier Lee - Post Motherhood Sisters - Draft 2 Izzy, Gabe and Martha have absolutely nothing in common, except the father of their children. Post-Motherhood-Sisters-Pilot-Draft-2.pdf |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
Lori Crawford - THE MURDER MINISTRY - Draft #1 Here's hoping I'm doing this right. THE MURDER MINISTRY1HR TV | CRIME THRILLERWhen a preacher who receives orders from God regarding whom to protect or whom to kill in service of that protection is c... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
SIDNEY RUSHING - STRUTS - DRAFT 1 STRUTS Logline: Failing at everything in life, an auto mechanic enrolls in a renowned auto college to end his family's decades long poverty cycle as he struggles with his past juvenile center trauma a... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
Todd McGuire - 17 Minutes Of Funk - Version 1 Junnie has been in the NBA for 10 years but has only played a total of 17 minutes of actual basketball, he is a career bench warmer. Junnie decided it was time for him to make a drastic move to get no... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
RE: Coverage Request: SANCTUARY (TV Pilot, 1-Hour Drama) Hello LeMar, Acknowledging this phenomenal story and also coming back to say I've completed my read and you'll be receiving feedback very soon! |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
RE: THE ALT WRONG by Lori Crawford | 1hr TV | Crime Drama | Draft as of 10/14/20 | Empire @lemarticusyahoo-com These are some great notes, LeMar. Thanks! |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
Lori Crawford - THE ALT WRONG - Draft 10/14/20 THE ALT WRONG1HR TV | CRIME DRAMAAn unforgiving black ATF agent who passes for white risks breaking cover with the genocidal white nationalist organization that killed her sister in order to apprehend... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
RE: Submitting coverage @lemarticusyahoo-com what you're describing isn't a site crash or a problem with the form. it's a browser security issue that often happens for a few reasons: a) your browser is blocking javascript an... |
In forum Site Navigation and Technical Issues |
2 years ago |
The Legend of Aparna, (Pilot, 1/2 hr, Comedy-Drama) --GROUP: ATLANTA FX LOGLINE: A Blindian, Bisexual, Gamer Girl takes on the gaming industry and assumes control as player one in pursuit of one day reshaping the face of gaming forever. |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
Coverage Request - BEFORE THE LAW v0.03 | 1 Hour Pilot | Mystery/Thriller | Group - Spook Who Sat By the Door Logline: Plagued by events from his past, A deranged genius plots an assassination which threatens to ruin a political scheme developed by an vengeful entrepreneur. link: Thanks in advance for a... |
In forum SCREENPLAY COVERAGE EXCHANGE |
2 years ago |
New Member Leigh Gregory Says "Hey!" Hello All! I'm a new member from L.A. and I hope each of you is safe, healthy, and happy in these unusual times. I'm excited to be here and looking forward to helping in any way I can. Till then, be w... |
In forum Member Introductions |
2 years ago |
Q&A with Watchmen Story Editor and Screenwriter Cord Jefferson Emmy-nominated for writing episode 6 of the most nominated show this year, HBO's The Watchmen, Cord Jefferson will join OBS for Q&A on Saturday, September 12 @ 4 pm just a little over a week befor... |
In forum Event Updates |
2 years ago |
RE: AN AFFLUENT HIDEAWAY BY ZELIE DEMBER-SLACK Hi Sidney, I contacted David to assist with the issue of sending the script attachment via a private message. He said we should report the issue in the group forum called Site Navigation and Technical... |
In forum A QUESTION OF FAITH |
2 years ago |
AN AFFLUENT HIDEAWAY BY ZELIE DEMBER-SLACK Zelie needs our help with coverage on her new TV faith based script. I have already started reading the pages -- well formatted, easy read. I love TV. Theresa I tried messaging you but could not get t... |
In forum A QUESTION OF FAITH |
2 years ago |
New Feedback Request | Sunday August 2, 2020 Tammi LaTela is requesting notes and feed on her logline for Sabile’s Girls. I attached the link to her request form and also the PDF file for her logline. In order to provide feedback for the ... |
In forum Soul Food |
2 years ago |
RE: Oldie but Newbie Welcome @lemarticusyahoo-com! Looking forward to all that you will bring to OBS. To introduce myself I will answer those same questions: What is your favorite word? SOLD! What is your favorite quot... |
In forum Member Introductions |
2 years ago |