@rushs847aol-com It's a pleasure to meet you. I hope we can exchange scripts and share ideas.

@jessejchildsgmail-com Hey, Sorry for the late reply. Yes, I still play electric guitar as a hobby.

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Thank you! I'll check out your notes ASAP!

Hey Cherrelle, I really like this story. Very nuanced, comedic, and progressive. Check out my link for your notes

Sounds good! Can't wait to read your feedback.

Hey Karlton, great script and original story! Here's my notes on your feature film.

Hey Alexia, great show! I truly enjoyed your pitch deck. Here's a few suggestions to make it top tier. Check out the link below.

Logline: A former tennis star with a hot-tempered and a heartbroken newcomer clash over tradition, customer service, and what it really means to belong- whether they like it or not- at an iconic Black...

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Copy! I'll exchange scripts in the community forum!

@wolfelexi3gmail-com Yeah, most people think that you can have a full hour comedy/dramedy but typically Dramas can have comedy but the story centers around a serious idea. Take "Euphoria" on HBO for e...

I agree with David. 5 act structure is the best way to go. Also, be careful when you're writing a comedy that's 45 minutes because those types of shows are typically half-hour. Make sure that you add ...

Welcome Jay! You have a distinct voice and a strong knowledge of self. I'd love to come to one of your improv shows. Let's connect!

Hey, I just downloaded the script. I'd love to provide feedback over the weekend.

Hey, Let's exchange scripts. I'm available all next week to do so. I have a half hour and short that needs notes.

Awesome! I'll look for it in the requests for notes. What's the title and genre of the pitch?

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Thank you M.B.! Are you a resident of Los Angeles? Can I see some of your content or give feedback to one of your scripts?

Hey OBS Fam! What’s good? I’m Chris D. Moore—writer, dreamer, and your friendly neighborhood multi-hyphenate artist. Born in Atlanta, Georgia, I made the leap to Los Angeles back in 2015 to chase drea...