Ariel Brown

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RE: Meemee Taylor - The Vessel - Draft 1

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Lol yeah I saw that and I couldn't believe it! And I didn't know that you could reupload either. And aww I'm glad to hear that 😊

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2 years ago
RE: Meemee Taylor - The Vessel - Draft 1

Of course, that's why we're here! I especially wanted to though after hearing that y'all were getting like 2 lines of coverage...a mess..smh. And I was just able to submit it! Again, excellent work!

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2 years ago
RE: Meemee Taylor - The Vessel - Draft 1

Hey Meemee, I Iust emailed you your coverage because I was having trouble submitting. Really beautiful work!

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2 years ago
RE: Jacquetta Farrar - Micah and Morgan - First Draft

Hey Jacquetta, Just emailed you coverage and an in script edit!

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2 years ago
RE: Gautier Lee - Post Motherhood Sisters | Draft 2

Hey Gautier, great read! Link to coverage attached below. Also emailed you a copy of the coverage as well as an in-script edit. Look forward to reading more!

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3 years ago
Ariel Brown - Bare Bones - Draft 1

A wayward carpenter, Cass, takes a job with a mystical old woman, Lucille, who compels Cass to confront her trauma in order to stand in her true power.

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3 years ago
RE: Kimberly Allen - Florida Sky - V5

Hey Kimberly, Just submitted coverage for your script. You did great work. I loved reading it! I'll also be emailing you the coverage and an in script edit.

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3 years ago
RE: June Neely - The Cauldron - V4

Hi June, Just submitted coverage for your pilot. Such a delightful read. I'll email you the coverage in case there were any issues in the forms portal, as well as an edit script PDF. Great work!

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3 years ago
RE: Yvette Freeman - Against The Light - First Draft

Hi Yvette, I just submitted coverage for you and emailed you an edited PDF. Let me know if you get it. Ariel Brown

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3 years ago
RE: Michael Adedeji Festival of Blood Version 1

Hey Michael, I'm emailing you the edited script pdf. Here is the link to the coverage. You have a spine-tingling, engaging piece here. I can't wait to read more!

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3 years ago
RE: Ariel Brown - Bare Bones, Draft 1 - 10/23/20

Thank you both for your notes! They are very helpful!

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3 years ago
RE: Beyond Forever (Feature) - Pierre Robinson - Group: Do The Right Thing

Hey Pierre, Just submitted coverage for Beyond Forever. I throughly enjoyed reading it and hope to read any future drafts! I also emailed you the edited script PDF. Here is the link to the coverage:

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3 years ago
Bare Bones N&F

Hi Everyone. I just posted a request for N&F for Act 1 of a Fantasy Drama feature. I look forward to reading the notes!

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3 years ago
Ariel Brown - Bare Bones, Draft 1 - 10/23/20

Working Logline: When a woman astray encounters a magical old woman, she must exercise her inner power to face her past and free herself.

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3 years ago
RE: Notes and Feedback

Sure thing Christopher. I'll have it to you in no more than week. I look forward to reading it.

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4 years ago
RE: Notes and Feedback

Hey Christopher. I would love to give you feedback. I clicked the link but I didn't see a PDF for the actual draft. It was just taking me to the coverage request form you filled out.

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4 years ago
Notes and Feedback

Hi Everyone. I just joined this group and I am ready to give notes/feedback to anyone in need.

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4 years ago
RE: Hi Everyone

@christopherharmon Thank you, Christopher!

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4 years ago
RE: Hi Everyone

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Thank you Sandra! I look forward to reading yours as well!

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4 years ago
RE: Hi Everyone

@scmpbllsbcglobal-net Thank you Sandra! I look forward to reading yours as well!

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4 years ago
RE: Hi Everyone

@bonitaheresbonita-com Thank you Bonita! I can't wait to learn more as well.

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4 years ago
Hi Everyone

My name is Ariel (like the three letters R-E-L). Very excited to be joining OBS. My focus with writing is on features and short films, as well as short stories. My stories tend to lean towards fantasy...

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4 years ago