I love the premise, however loglines are only 1-2 sentences. I would use the "when-then" format and specify a goal to show the journey.

Hi, I would love to see the John Boyega film on Saturday 9/3/2022. I'm a screenwriter who specializes in television and film with a few contest and fellowship placements. Currently, I'm working on a...

@christopherharmon Hey,man. Thanks for spending your time reading this.

When two friends from Philadelphia decide to move to Hollywood to pursue their dreams: one, to be an artist and the other to be a mogul, they realize that the rise to the top of Tinsel Town is going t...

Hi Kevin, I really enjoyed reading your script. Here is the link to your coverage:

I'm having a problem submitting my script coverage online. I'm using a MacBook Air on Google Chrome. I tried logging out then back in again to no avail. I have spoken to David Byrd who told me to s...

Hi all, This is my newest script.

When a pandemic and racial riots topple the city of Philadelphia, a Jitney driver must forsake his old, bigoted ways to get his life back, mend the broken relationship with his son and bring order to ...

Hi Soul Food, I joined over a month ago but never posted to the group. I have a script that I would like covered "The Last Jitney" which is a bit of an adaptation of the play. Anyone interested in pro...

Hi OBS Members, I'ma a features and television writer that joined about a month and a half ago. I'm looking to make friends with like-minded writers to collaborate and exchange feedback. Any takers?? ...