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I'd be interested in reading what other members suggest. I think five act is more contemporary and common; and, even if you chose three-act, you'd essentially have to structure pacing (given the way c...

@ronrocearthlink-net you didn't use the correct form, ron. Don't edit the link that MeeMee sent. Complete the provide notes and feedback form:

@ksam-sinoutlook-com consider not waiting until you type "the end" to get some feedback on your masterpiece. Sometimes, we know exactly what we intend, but an audience is always half the equation. ma...

My favorite movie by far from 2024 is FLOW and it doesn't have a single spoken word of dialogue. What was your favorite film released last year?

@christopherharmon Truly appreciate you taking the time to help me tell this story.

Thank you for your feedback and keen insight, Dziko. Welcome to OBS!

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Now more than ever, we're all in this together. This is our time! Thank you so much. It's all about WE and US.

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Thank you, as always, MeeMee. Your notes inspired a deeper exploration and offer a different perspective. Happy New Year!

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Happy Holidays, M.B. Blessings to you and yours and as always, thank you for manifesting the entire spirit of OBS.

There are several drama series streaming now with strong black lead characters. What's your favorite? What would you have done differently as the show runner? What stood out to you? Have you read any ...

As many of you know, I'm saving ideas and trying to sequence the projects. Any feedback or reaction to the attached would be deeply appreciated

Congratulations!!! Push through and keep getting the wins. It's great to be you and more success is coming.

Christopher, with much gratitude and authentic appreciation for you sharing your observations and time: Thank you.

@brownhilcomcast-net Thank you, Adrienne. Your time is precious. Thanks for sharing a little on my humble idea. Don't forget to submit a N&F form to get your credits/stars!

Might be a challenge, but I'll track down the production team and writers and make the ask. I'll keep you posted.

Good observations on both. Really appreciate you finding the time to share your perspective. It will go a long way towards helping me figure out what's next.

@oscarwilson1796gmail-com Thank you so much for sharing your impressions. It matters.

@mbstevenswritegmail-com Thank you very much for your observations and sharing your time.

@ronrocearthlink-net Big thank you for finding the time!

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Many thanks. Humbled by your finding the time and responding so soon. Thanks again.

@mtaylor_123yahoo-com Thank you so much for the notes and for catching the technical glitch. Appreciate you!

Here's a fantasy/comedy idea I'm considering writing. If you can be so kind as to share your thoughts, I'd be forever grateful. Thank you in advance and perpetually:

I'm fleshing out an idea for a series and would appreciate feedback. This is not an actual treatment or pitch. It's a summary of the broad strokes of the concept. Thank you in advance for sharing you...

I'll put in a request for it. Stay tuned.

Hey, M.B. Thanks for your patience. Good start. Here's my coverage. You can view it anytime from this link below: